I thought that it would be better if the tree RENDERING using the scribbling technique instead the hatching technique.
The clouds were a little under-rendered. Should add more rendering to give it more volume.
DETAILING on the ground is very minimal and kinda boring.
Positioning of the human figure at the most front was positioned slightly wrong as it was supposed to look as if it/he would rest on the tree. The tree proportion is also a bit wrong. The trees seemed a little small compared to the human figures.
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